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جمرةٍ(ن)                                                                                                                                                                           وسط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬جوفي                                                                                                                                                                           .محرقتني                                                                                                                                                                           حريقلوطفت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       نارها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        .صلوها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ماطفى
                                                                                                        كل                                                                                                        ماحاولت                                                                                                        مره                                                                                                         إنيط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬نقذ                                                                                                         غريقليا                                                                                                                   نتشلته                                                                                                                   من                                                                                                                   الغبه.                                                                                                                   وقف                                                                                                                   ثم                                                                                                                    هفى
                                                                                                  وطيري                                                                                                  اللي                                                                                                  غذيته                                                                                                  .لين                                                                                                  جاء                                                                                                  له                                                                                                   صفيقبالجناحين                                                                                                                                                                            يصفق                                                                                                                                                                            .عقب                                                                                                                                                                            ريشه                                                                                                                                                                            ضفى
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مايحوش                                                                                                                                                                            المراجل                                                                                                                                                                            .من                                                                                                                                                                             بضله                                                                                                                                                                             يويقولايخاوي                                                                                                                                                                            النشاما.                                                                                                                                                                            من                                                                                                                                                                            ظرى                                                                                                                                                                            بالدفى
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                                                                                                                  وعّد                                                                                                                  من                                                                                                                  زارمكه                                                                                                                  .وطاف                                                                                                                  بالبيت                                                                                                                   العتيقاللهمط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬صلي                                                                                                                               وأسلم                                                                                                                               .على                                                                                                                               الهادي                                                                                                                               المصطفى















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غير مقروء 27-Jun-2006, 12:05 AM رقم المشاركة : 2
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غير مقروء 27-Jun-2006, 01:49 AM رقم المشاركة : 3
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إحصائية العضو






أبن مسلم غير متواجد حالياً

افتراضي

الاخ خلف مرزوق

شكراً لك على إهتمامك الزائد

وأنا لست شاعر


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غير مقروء 27-Jun-2006, 01:53 AM رقم المشاركة : 4
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أبن مسلم غير متواجد حالياً

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الاخ خلف مرزوق

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وأنا متذوق للشعر

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غير مقروء 19-Jul-2006, 02:14 PM رقم المشاركة : 5
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