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الشاعر الأمير محمد الأحمد السديري عندما يناجي بالشعر شاعراً آخر فلابد أن نجزم أنه لا يناجي الا شاعراً كبيراً له مكانته وقوته الشعرية وهذا ما نجده في معظم شعر السديري من خلال مراسلاته الشعرية التي تجذبنا ونتذوق الشعر من خلالها ولقد كان للأمير السديري قصائد عدة كأنواع من المساجلات ما بينه وبين عمير والتي لها الطابع الشعري الجذاب والمميز ومن هذه نورد من الابداع ما بين الشاعرين هذه المساجلة الشعرية التي ابتداها السديري بقوله





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ياط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬مير انا اخترتكط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬لى جملة الناسابيك                                                                     في                                                                     بعض                                                                      الأمور                                                                      تحشـم                                                                      لـي
اللي                                                                     شربت                                                                     بكأس                                                                     حبه                                                                     بـلا                                                                      قيـاسياط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬مير                                            جذ                                            البعـد                                            شملـه                                            وشملـي
متى                                                          نشوفهط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬قب                                                          الاقفـا                                                          والايـاسومتى                                                         السعدط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬قب                                                         الفراق                                                          يخطملـي
ان                                                                     غاب                                                                      تهت                                                                      بغبة                                                                      مابهـا                                                                      اونـاسوابرى                                                                     ليا                                                                     شفته                                                                     وعمره                                                                      سلـم                                                                      لـي
بكبرط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ناي ليا  اسلمتط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬نه  الارماسويضحك                                                                    زماني                                                                    وان                                                                     مشى                                                                     بالقدم                                                                     لي
دايم                                                                                       يباريني                                                                                       مـن                                                                                       الـود                                                                                       هوجـاساما                                                                     سرى                                                                     مسـراي                                                                      والا                                                                      جهـم                                                                      لـي
باب                                                                                      الموده                                                                                       لي                                                                                       ينـادي                                                                                       بالاجـراسوالحبط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ن                                            كل                                            الخلايق                                            قسـم                                             لـي
بالليل                                            ياقف                                            ليط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ن                                            النـوم                                            حـراسوكثر                                                                                      الهموم                                                                                      الموجعـه                                                                                       ترتـدم                                                                                       لـي
ويهب                                                                     لي                                                                     من                                                                     واعي                                                                     الحب                                                                     نسنـاسمن                                                                     شاف                                                                     حالي                                                                     بالشتا                                                                     ينهضـم                                                                     لـي
وان                         قلت                         لي                         ياط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬مير                         لا                         باس                         لا                          باساقولط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬نـا                                                           ياعميـر                                                           ياثقـل                                                            حملـي
ياط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬مير                                                           قلبـي                                                           والمعاليـق                                                           يبـاسقل                                                                                      للشريعه                                                                                      بالقصاص                                                                                      تحكـم                                                                                       لـي




ولقد كان للشاعر عمير بن زبن جواب ومناجاة للقصيدة التي وجه لها بمطلع صريح وكان رده جميلاً لا يأتي الا من شاعر له مكانته الشعرية المعروفة حيث قال:





حيّ                                           الجواب                                           اللي                                           لفانـي                                           بقرطـاسخطّ                                   جميل                                   وكـل                                   مـا                                   فيـه                                    جملـي
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اهلاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬دد رمل الزبايـر والاطعـاسوما                                   لاح                                   برق                                   من                                    سحـاب                                    يهملـي
جاني                                          وقمت                                          اضرب                                          اخماس                                          واسداسبالفكر مامضمون خـط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬رسـم لـي
وبانت معاني خط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ابو زيد لا  بـاسصابه                                  مرض                                   قلب                                   من                                   الـود                                   مملـي
خلّى                                           فواده                                           تقـل                                           يصلـي                                            بمحمـاسواصبحط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬لى ما قيل به بيت نملـي
والود                                            اصاويبه                                            ولا                                            فيـه                                            وسـواسوفهمت                                  مضمونه                                  مثل                                   ما                                   فهـم                                   لـي
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اقوم                                                          بالواجـب                                                          جمالـه                                                          ونومـاسحق                                   مثل                                   ما                                   شـال                                   همـي                                    وحملـي
الرفقه                                           اللي                                           مالهـا                                            بالوفـا                                            سـاسوش                                           ينبغي                                            فيهـا                                            لياخـاب                                            الاملـي
لعـل   دار   بعّـدتط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬نـه   الاونـاساوناس  مضنونـهط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â‚¬ع‘ط¢آ¬ط·آ¹أ¢â‚¬ع©ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ساهـا   تهملـي



هذا ماحاولت جمعه من قصائد للشاعر عمير بن زبن بن عمير البراق
ومن لديه إضافه للقصائد السالفه فليتكرم بتنزيلها ليكتمل
هذا الديوان ..
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